hmm.. what do you think

[Ariel Foster-Richards]

okay ui wrote this poem and i wanna know what you guys think


Bad Dream
Just another brick in the wall
but, please don't let me fall.
My fingers slip,
And your tears drip.
My life flashes like lightning,
And your sad face is frightening.
I call out your name,
but you never came.
I felt the mud,
ad i landed with a thud.
Then everything went back,
then i was back
I felt my warm sheets,
and my own heart beats.
It was just a dream,
i open my eyes and beam.
Your right next to me,
and now i can see.
I'm not alone anymore,
not like before.

[Ariel Foster-Richards]

hmm... ;D

[Andrew Foster]

;D
I think that I feel bad that no one's answered and it's really a quite good poem, me lovely.