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Post by syndelleryan on Jun 16, 2007 20:21:25 GMT
i was bored and decided to write a song i dont know if its good or not, but please be the judge of that...
A little Difference lies between a sinner and a suspect
[verse 1] Sinners have the forgiveness of sins a suspect tells the judge the incident.
[chorus]
was it true, was it fake, was it him was it her, only one from above can truely tell who the liar is. [verse 2] The father announces the sinners forgive ness of sins, the judge announces the suspects time of his crime.
[chorus]
[verse 3]
Within time again the sinner will sin again, the suspect pays his time out now, now the sinner pays back his time of crime, then the suspect is now forgiven.
[chorus]
[verse 4]
Now that the rolls have switched The sinner pays time from his crime, like the suspect from behind, Which leads the suspect, into pleads of his own sin...
Sinners are suspects, suspects are sinners. People are sinners and suspects both leading into church pews and court stands..
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Post by Ian Hunt on Jun 16, 2007 20:22:39 GMT
Wow...that's really good.
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Post by syndelleryan on Jun 16, 2007 20:23:36 GMT
really...thanx
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Post by Zacky Gates on Jun 16, 2007 20:44:29 GMT
that good....
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Post by syndelleryan on Jun 16, 2007 22:50:53 GMT
thank you
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Post by Taya Lynn Roberts on Jun 16, 2007 23:25:11 GMT
Talents. I hate you now I cant write to save my life XD
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Post by Isabella Knox on Jun 17, 2007 11:10:56 GMT
I have written some lyrics but they're pitiful compared to that lol, it's well good.
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Post by syndelleryan on Jun 17, 2007 18:22:11 GMT
thank you all who read it...
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Post by Angel Simons on Jun 17, 2007 18:23:11 GMT
O.O That's awesome! So jealous...
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Post by syndelleryan on Jun 17, 2007 18:25:22 GMT
why are you jelous?
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